A few big differences between the laast picture and this one.
1. I did all the inking on my tablet. Usually I ink with my pens and don't have the option of "undo" or "go back in time and take better care of pens".
2. I tried something a little different with the clothes shading. I used a hard brush and smear in only two colours over the base, rather than layers and layers of smaller brushes. I think this looks much crisper.
3. More realistic eyes. I followed totally different tutorial (which I will link to when I find it again, I totally closed the window >_<. I think they look much more realistic, less dreamy than my usual.

The three bigest screw up are 1. Her one enormous boob.
2. That curl of hair from nowhere. It doesn't really seem to connect to her head.
3, Her lack of chin. She's supposed to be tilting her head up a little, but instead she looks like its one smooth surface, no neck OR chin.

Looking for constructive critiques from anyone who sees anything else. This character was drawn for Rinya and designed by Dragon Rhapsody.